All Comments on 'The Lonely Receptionist'

Good story with good endng7A

Loved this story and the way she teased you with her sexy body. Eventually unable to control her desire any longer and wanted you to take her. Excellent

I thought the story plot was good with good potential but it was badly written

What's wrong with this paragraph?

"When I woke up from daydreaming, Venus had been trying to pass my receipt to me, and had been holding it at the door slit for a while. He hurried took it and tried to chat with her."

As noted...poorly written. Give it a few rewrights and it will shine. This could be fun.

The word is prostrate, not prostate. Otherwise, a great story.

she led them both on, got away scott free and keeps her husband, who will never know what she did

clever slut

hopefully, one day, she'll get what she deserves

"And commitment is important in a marriage." stares in visible confusion..

"And commitment is important in a marriage." thats some irony

Good it ended when it did!

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