All Comments on 'The Lonely Salesman'

Very well written, sex was hot yet romantic , overall a super effort! A's all around for this one!

This is every mans dream of a lover.

Well written and very enjoyable to read.

I look forward to more or your stories.

I love the personnel touch and the romantic heart. Very erotic, I am looking forward to your next story

You sure scored a home run in the first innings..

Keep scoring...Thanks for the post.

You sure scored a home run in the first innings..

Keep scoring...Thanks for the post.

Well written, great sex, exciting. Job well done.

The author provides wonderful details and does a great job of describing scenes. Awesome job!

windows have shutters.

people shudder.

The first chapter in this wonderful romantic story is a real tear-jerker. One gets a real feel for the characters, and the story unfolds at a pace that is never rushed. The emotions involved, from loneliness to love, are truly moving. The author has balanced plot and love scenes exactly right, and this only adds to the overall emotion punch that this story delivers. While some editing would make this chapter even better, this in no way detracts from what is a truly great story. The excellent Romance gets 5 stars only because 6 stars cannot be given.