All Comments on 'The Long Ride Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Hot Story

It felt a little rushed, but still good. Maybe next time you can draw it out a little.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very Good.

Loved it. Can't wait to read the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sisters are made to fuck

Loved the story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW

I liked it big time!

You have to write more, and I want to know what colleage she chooses....

will they keep on seeing each other

BiancaMmmmBiancaMmmmover 13 years ago
More please :-)

I really liked this story. Looking forward the the follow up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DELETE OR FINISH

time get writing or erasing it is never acceptable to leave the readers hanging. good or not always finish what you start. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Not ended story

Nice story, but not ended. We are waiting the next chapter from 6 years ago!

Is for that I give you only 4*.

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