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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very Good!

It's amazing that you can create characters in such a short piece,create the sense of longing and desire. Bravo!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE LONG TIME GONE SYNDROME

leads to a short stop and quick finish, TK U MLJ LV NV

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
It is good that they were both glad he was home again

Life is good, being loved is better!

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...