All Comments on 'The Long Way Home'

Damn it why did you have to bring up his brother. I was having fun until that creepy incest stuff came into it.

Shoulda just made it his best friend from highschool.

Interesting read, and pretty hot too. I do think it is in the wrong category, maybe should be under Exhibitionist & Voyeur or maybe NonConsent/Reluctance. Maybe even a new category called Caught Naked. It was a fun read anyway.

You can't please everybody, just keep writing and know that people will read and enjoy it. Good job.

Amazing ending, and I loved the weird details, like the flower and using him as a target. Incredibly hot. You're a great writer!