All Comments on 'The Long Weekend'

Loved the way you expressed the sensations and emotions of both participants. A truly erotic scene!

Really well written. Great story.

A well written story....although was not sure about the slave nodding too much in the story, but could see the reasoning behind the mention of nodding, so well done!

Very nicely done. I am not usually a fan of Femdom writing but this was equisite.

Very well done; exactly the right amount of information and imagination, story and fantasy, eroticism and porn. Hot, hot, hot!!!

As one who has been on both sides of the equation, I understand the nodding and floating as well as the exquisite delight in that kind of humiliation and possession.

I will look for more from this author.

enjoying the story as much as I did. There were a few typos that I wish you would fix but - in spite of that your descriptions were very well done. Thank you.

Incredible Story!

Nice! I love the parts where Mistress plays with the slave's nipples.

"She slid her hands and nails over the soft skin of his hairless chest, paying special attention to his nipples." -- I would love that!

"The pleasant sensations from his nipples were causing him to lose control of his body and his mind." -- That would be me!

"Then suddenly she used her fingernails to pinch each nipple hard at its base, and pulled them outward." -- I would love a woman doing this to my nipples as well!

I love nipple play. I would love for a woman to dominate me like this, putting clothespins on my man-nipples and flogging my ass with her crop.

Pissing in someone’s mouth is truly disgusting.