All Comments on 'The Look'

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LeFrog08LeFrog08about 13 years ago
That was nice!

Loved the twist at the end!

JusttooldJusttooldabout 13 years ago
Lovely

I just loved the description of a woman with "the look"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I Saw It Coming

Almost from the end of the first page i suspected they were married to each other but, honestly, that made it better for me. What a great way to get some of the magic back in a marriage! You could tell from the bedroom description, the talk and the way they slept they were more in love than lust. Ya done well.

SW MO HERMIT

chytownchytownover 12 years ago
WOW!!!

I really enjoyed this story very different. Thanks for sharing this hot story!!

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 5 years ago
Wrong Category

Not LW ...TLW at best. The ‘seduction’ was too easy, so the ‘surprise ending’ was not a surprise.

3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good stuff! Cool ending! -5-

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