by DamienDeath20
I have been following your story since the beginning and continue to enjoy it with every new chapter. It's not just another fem-boy story though I love those) but really clever fantasy/fiction that keeps the reader guessing as the plot develops. Thank you for a very enjoyable series
This is probably the story I've been most emotionally invested into on this website. Great work like always
Bruh, when are you gonna write anything else about breeding Seasons? That story seems great as well
I want to say first I absolutely love reading your work. All your futa work is top notch. Which is why this chapter was a bit of a let down. I'm not faulting you for writing about the 2 femboys even though it was definately not my thing but to each his own. But I would have loved to hear more from the actual gang bang. You could have written more than snipets of it. Alone the scene between Sin, Ian and Cassie would have been really hot to hear in more detail aswell as all the others joining in
I fucking love this series so far, but the story makes me cringe in the best way. like, CALL LILINES REAL NAME IAN, CMON MAN THAT MOTHER IS ACTUALLY THE DEVIL, STOP FEELING HOPELESS MAAAN
This is just too fucking dark. I don't know why you have to prelude the sex scenes by making me feel terrible for Ian. It's like watching one of those ASPCA commercials before you have sex. Do people really find sadness sexy? 'He's completely miserable; what a turn on!'
That's just not for me.
It can't be all good all the time sir, there has to be an antagonist and something to overcome. Ian has been through bad stuff before.
Obviously noting that this is only chapter 8 of many more, you know he gets out of this predicament. I do hope you don't quit on the story because Ian has reached his lowest point, you have yet to see him at his highest!