All Comments on 'The Lost Boy Ch. 11'

fucking awesome , thanks for posting i can't wait for more.

Amazing combination of erotica , sci-fi , occult, preternatural and horror .

Umm ..... It is a bit of a sausage fest . Not a criticism , but would not even the supernatural beings need a ovum donor and womb ? I am sure that you will work that in sometime . Just an example of how thought provoking this series truly is .

Thanks for posting . So grateful for the latest installment .

I like "futa on male" , but " femboy on femboy " ((((

It may have taken a while but man oh man was it worth the wait! Feles and Erica, holy shit that was hot. This series is easily some of the best work on this site

Of course it's a sausage fest though! Lmfaoo that's how the Succubi have fun :3 But they aren't only interested in guys, it's been mentioned a couple times that they are interested in women as well, but they have more fun with boys x)

As a great woman once said, "Pussy's only good for making babies ;D"

I am so happy ur finally back on this series cuz it’s my fav and wow did you surprise me with this one. I gave it five stars(cause duuhhh lmao). I love how there’s a show of strength is the story it’s almost like a hentai with action in it. -the nerd in me is activating- I would have never expected Cassiel to get strength feats, makes me ponder how strong he could be compared to Maeghedda, Melodia, etc. the strength of angels compared to Succubi etc. the marking on Ian’s forehead intrigued me too, it sounds like some sort of new hacks(or hacks resistance)/regeneration capability is being introduced which excites me a ton -nerd moment over- to me, the scene between Feles and Erica was too adorable and so fucking sexy I was smiling at how she was in so much shock that his hair was shorter lol. Idk what is but the really skinny one of Ian’s friends that got raped in the end was really annoying lmao. But yeah awesome chapter, can’t wait for the next.

This story embodies everything I love in my smut; fem boys which may very well be shotas getting nailed by futanaris! What makes it all the more better? Non con, blackmail, reluctance, bdsm, a whole lot of hardcore and no one getting tossed aside like garbage after some time, especially that last one! Can't wait for more wonderful works from your beautiful brain you kinky genius!

Now, onto technicals. I see no wrongs in your story. Sure, there are grammatical errors scattered about, but its excusable seeing as it doesn't take away from the flow of the story. It got repetitive at some point, chapter 3-5 I believe, but you have a way of adding fetishes and characters with personalities that make everything fresh. And the characters, best move. A great philosopher once claimed that the body is the movie and the penis is the star. Adding more bottom characters, thankfully not wholly female, makes it all the more better. Feles' personality is a sharp contrast to the reluctant or honest innocence if Ian and Cassie while Peter offers a great look into how cute lil human bois are treated when they're taken. I love Peter's bit, especially, since there is no immediate biological response that compells him to automatically submit, making his onternal debates and thoughts all the more heartbreakingly, turn-onyly genuine. What tops it all of? Not everybody is flocking towards Ian and tossing the other bois tp the gutter. That is what I love especially. It adds more depth to the top characters when they aren't all buzzing around Ian like bees compelled by the strict desire to mate with him and him only. Again, I can't wait for more, I love Breeding Season and this, The Lost Boy, and am lnow going to binge read your other works. I love you and what you do, thank you for making my, as well as others, fantasies into reality

Thanks everyone for your comments. I am the commissioner of the story and this is one of my favorite fetishes as well. I am so glad you all are enjoying it, thank you for your wonderful comments!

This is one of the hottest chapters of the series! I'd love a spin off!

Amazing