All Comments on 'The Lost Boy'

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Please make more...

totally agree with the previous comment

Looking forward to the next one.

Thanks.

hot as fuck , please more i cannot wait for more. thank you.

Wonderful story, I can not wait for more! But if the next parts are this good I guess I can wait a little longer.

Keep it up. This was very well thought out, written, and presented.

Could have added something about actual lube being applied to the hole as a nine inch anything sounds really painful even with lube. That and small and ultra big (dick size) is just too overused and ruins verisimilitude, especially ultra big. The same effect could have been made with 7 inches especially on a virgin asshole unless you add screams of pain and blood from tearing.

Bigger the cock the better, with lots of cum

An intriguing -and sexy- start. Though I am curious to learn more about Ian, as his character seemed to undergo a rather abrupt metamorphosis from where he started. I mean, he damn near had a panic attack just from a cab driver talking to him. So I was expecting him to go into a complete catatonic state when Val 'pounced' on him.

I'm a transguy and the idea of a 'Valerie' taking control and fucking me hard totally got me wet! 😍

An arousing....devilishly so....extremely erotic....descriptive "tail" !!! Ur thread has me so hottt🔥❤🔥🔥 that i can't stop caressing my tight...wet....VS THONG 👙🚺💜 Thanks for sharing this.....delicious....THREAD!!!

SissyCrissy6245.............xoxoxo

It is well_ written as usual ,the build up ,the story idea, the sex ,the promising ending ,hope to see jeoulsy and fight between sister and would claim him eventually . a bit of romance would be good too but the pounding should be brutal with a lot of positions , I want to see more , more ,and more..

Oh WOW !!! Great story, great start. Look forward to a lot more of this

Okay you need to fix your warnings at the start…this was a full blown rape scene with all the anxiety inducing of one, this wasn’t non-con at all, since you made the effort to show the MC’s panic towards people and his cries at the beginning until the mind control kicked in, joking about it at the start just reads a like you are mocking readers and I doubt that was your intention at all.

Re: Anonymous, I'm very sorry you disliked the scene, I try to keep a light vibe in my author's notes so I'm sorry if I came across as insensitive. I'm a big fan of non-con that becomes con, or CNC and I actually am not a big fan of full blown rape. Again I'm sorry for upsetting you, I know some parts of the story are rough and dark, but I promise it does all work out, I much prefer warm fuzzies then bad hentai stuff. And I'm working to get more of the happy into my erotica every day <3

"Barely forced" The entire scene is full on rape lmao

Yeah, a guy being hard DOES NOT mean he consents... disgusting