All Comments on 'The Lost City Ch. 01'

by gogolovercoat

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LateNightStoriesLateNightStoriesabout 9 years ago
The start of a great erotic drama.

As I've told you before, this is really good. I hope other people will appreciate as much as I do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
So much anger!

Josef will never find happiness, because of his annoying habit of being annoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great First Chapter for a first story writer.

I loved your story with its excellent humor and many references to literature. It is obvious you are very well read and have a high intellect. I look forward to your future writings.

fuckasaurusfuckasaurusabout 9 years ago

wow, very good story! I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Beautifully presented!

What wonderful way of storytelling. Thanks for the beautiful narrative. Looking forward to the next part.

dinkymacdinkymacabout 9 years ago
Nice!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

I never comment but this is by far one of the sexiest pieces I've read. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

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