All Comments on 'The Lost Dandhakaas'

by andhravadoo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
...'the fuck?

....'the fuck?

andhravadooandhravadooover 8 years agoAuthor
@ the fuck

Could you elaborate?

FinalManFinalManover 8 years ago
There's a lot going on here...

I don't know if I agree with the previous comment but, I can somewhat understand their comment to a degree.

This started out very interesting but it went in a very wild direction pretty quickly. I kind of lost interest half way through then, I made it to the end and didn't understand what you were trying to do.

It was written frenetically and I found it a little hard to follow at times. I think all the themes you were trying to incorporate is what through it off in my opinion.

I'm not a fan of the masculine sort of futanari as well so, I'd take a lot of my criticisms with a grain of salt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting storyline

Liked it

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