by TheTask
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
Neeeeed Moooooooorrrrrrreee
Thanks for the great ride you've taken us on. This has been one of my favorite series on the site and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Although I would love to find out if Rainer will ever get the upper hand with his girls.
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
Seriously.....I'll even buy a special knife.....
I have a direct set of skills.... you will either create a sequel or I shall hunt you down and enact these skills upon your body and soul one by one until you cry for release from your fleshy prison. Capiche?
we have really enjoyed this story and cant wait to read more about these characters and other stories you may have
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
Best thing since sliced bread my friend. Make a sequel that rivals this story and I'll award you a Nobel Peace Prize for being one cool as fuck dude!
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR
THROAT!"
Or more in that universe. Ever read manyeyedhydra, if you have ill feed you to nyte in his story's. I will rip out your soul and leave you in the sands of sloth for eternity if I don't get more. MAKE IT HAPPEN
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!" Or something like that. Cliched, quoted, Internet threats aside; please make more. It's awesome and people like it. A lot. I'll see if I can get some time to proofread the chapters for you, it shouldn't be too bad of a job :-D. Good work. Keep it up
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
One of the best stories on this site unique and extremely interesting
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
This was damned good. Now make more or I wont cut your throat. I'll send you swimming with cement shoes instead! (as per your re4quest at the end of the chapter lol). On top of that,mind doing a short on the Jinn and Laurens mother?
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL BEAT U TO HALF DEATH!" Don't want to cut your throat...b'coz if u r dead then we'll never get the sequel...;) :D
YES MAKE MORE PLEASE. I really don't know where u go from here thought. Maybe Lauren Mom plot line. Or the angel and the solth guy.
Hahaha I find it really funny that some people copyed your "wanted" response down. Anyways, I really enjoyed this story and would truly love it if you continued with it. Your sense of humor is really great and I love your view on this, genre? I want to start writing my own story but truthfully all the good authors have me a bit intimidated.
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!" :P
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
You are awesome an I would very much like to read a sequel to lord lost. It has been brilliant!!!
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
Holy hell...
Well, I have possible prompts on my profile page. Check them out if you're interested and tell me what you think.
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
You are a great writer and I just hope that you carry on writing if you do write a sequel great. I will definitely be reading it - I'll also be reading everything else you decide to publish on ths site
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
This is probably the best story i have read on literotica. If you stop i will cry :(
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
This is the best story here I've read by far, and i would be most displeased if you were to stop making these so YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
I'll be honest, this isn't the best story I've read on the site. I'm not even sure if proper editing and proofreading could make it the best I've read on the site.
But it would be a complete, utter lie if I said it wasn't in the list of stories on Lit that are worth taking the time to read.
How do the circles react to what Belphegor did during the war that determined the Lord of Lust? Do new wars occur, and when, and why?
Things I want to see in a sequel:
1. Asmodea telling Asmodius that Rainy is much better in bed. Preferably in front on most of his kids.
2. Rain causing another angel or two or twelve to fall. I just think it would be amusing.
3. More epic stories
4. More epic lewds
5. You having fun
The Lost World is one the way, chapters 0-1 are being processed by literotica now and should be up within the next week. As for what happens... Well, let's find out, hmm?
Please make a sequel. This is a story that has so much more potential for both story and erotic content. With all the different demon lords, angels, and any other big bad that would fit in this universe there is potential of at least a trilogy. I beg you please, even if you feel that there are too few comments it is still something that you will want to do.
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
More please, A great story would love to read more about your world you have created.
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST.
I love this best story series I've finished in erotic supernatural this would be 2 best im waiting for more keep it up.
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
U said it better than i could have, and i've already read this twice so its awesome.
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME!!!! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR ILL SHOVE A BLENDER IN YOUR ASS! LMFAO
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
one of the best i have read in a while
Please make more of this series
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!
You have a good imagination. Of course, people will want to read your story. Doesn't mean you've gota torture them. Come on ! GET AN !!!
MAKE A SEQUEL PR ILL FIND YOU. IVE READ ALOT OF STOEIES AUCH ASS BLAZING GLORY AND ACUP ANGST. AND I GOTTA SAY UOUR UP THERE WITH THE BEST. YEA YOU MADE SOME MISTAKES, BUT WHO HASN'T. CAN WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL
After four days I just finished your story and now I'm sorry I read so fast and will hope the story will continue
Your combat scenes completely suck. Arazra fires several bullets at Rainer, and after that they somehow find time to chat a bit before the bullets hit ? I mean i can understand demons moving at the speed of light, but demons chatting at the speed of light ? Long story short : to much mindless taunting in your fights.
Glad I happened across this wonderful series! Hope it somehow continues!
I read this story the year you finished it. I reread this story because it was fucking awesome. Brilliant story telling and very creative concept.
I have to say, that was one of the better tales I've read on this site. The story-line and plot were very good, and the sex scenes were good too.
Have to admit, I am usually a grammar-nazi. However, your straight-forward, "I'm lazy" and "If you don't like it, don't read it" snarky comments were rather refreshing.
If you should want someone to edit future tales, drop me a note.
Loved all your hard work on this. Now I hope you will consider to continue on the series.
Please continue with this epic story I loved each chapter and would love much more.
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
"YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME! MAKE MORE FUCKING LOST LORD OR I'LL CUT YOUR THROAT!"
The Lost Lord was very enjoyable to read. Its Japanese influence is obvious, and it reads like an anime or light novel. Unfortunately, it also contains some classic, annoying anime tropes, such as the guy who complains about having a harem, and the enemy who starts fighting at less than his full power.
Each chapter is also littered with comma splices, sometimes even to the point where the meaning is unclear.
Despite the story's faults, I enjoyed it as a whole, and I rounded up to give it a five-star rating.
Hmm - just reread all 27 chapters. Enjoyed it just as much as the first time through. If you ever start writing again, I'd be willing to edit for you.
Brilliant storyline but clearly not finished in my view. There's still to many unanswered questions, did he actually marry Nerissa or did he marry someone else? Did Laureen stay a mortal or did he turn her into a demon so she wouldn’t die early and stay immortal? Did he produce an heir and what about in death sword did Nerissa keep it or did she give to Rainer. My Lucifer, I could go on and on. So for an incomplete story I still gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️