All Comments on 'The Love Machine'

Okay. you wrote enough to hook my attention. Now I want to enjoy the rest of the story, please.

Roadie

Somewhere about a third of the way thru the story died.

Nice plot, it has been used before and handled better.

Sorry

On the original story, either MS Word or I (most likely me) caused the latter portion of the story to become lost. I have had it reloaded and hope it makes a little more sense. I apologize for the error.