by RobMontague
I liked the story but few paragraphs were hard to read for me as non-native English reader.
I meant to give it a 5 but pressed the four so ANYWAYS I SAY 5 STARS I LOVE IT SO FAR!
The one thing bugging me is you keep switching between peoples proper names and their nick names I found it a bit difficult to keep up with who was who at the start. I could still be confused for all I know ahhahaha
Otherwise it's looking like a good series