by RobMontague
i was really enjoying this piece why so brief..hurry with the other chapter i've waited long for this
just wanted to say, when is the next chapter coming, i'm dying to read more!
I feel bad by saying that this was wayyy too short because it's clear by how amazing this story is at how much work you must have put into this. I love love love this story. The combination of comedy, romance, and heartbreak leave me wanting more. Thank you for an amazing story.
this so one of my favorite stories now! there has to be more! when is the next chapter gonna be here, i can't wait?!
Loved it! Some spelling/grammatical errors, but the story had a great plot and the characters were both very lovable and hateable. Cute couple description by the way (gotta love a jock with long hair falling for a emoish outcast!)
I hate unfinished stories. Normally I totally avoid them, but I thought with 8 chapters this was done. What a disappointment!
I also hate when a story isn't finished. As much as you closed alot of the issues, having him tell his parents was a big thing. This didn't feel complete. It's a shame b/c it was an enjoyable story. I also would recommend getting an editor or even just a friend to read it through. There were a number of times when a wrong word was used. Grammar seemed to be okay. It slowed you a little when you had to figure out what word really belonged. Easily fixed. I hope you do a last chapter or epilogue...but this might be too old to hope for that. I didn't check.
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