All Comments on 'The Love of Pain and Submission'

...if some of its density had been broken up by a little dialogue from time to time. Your writing is very good, your understanding of the D/s dynamic is faultless, but at times it felt as if I was wading through the thigh-deep undergrowth of your prose, good as it was.

Consequently, I gave it 4 *s. IMHO, re-writing it with some exchange between the characters would have made this story an outright winner.

Thank you for bringing it to us.

even to evoke one of my quibble sessions.

I am just starting the journey and this story lets me know I am okay. Thank you so much

Sad this story was not continued.

A really good read -- fascinating. Could any submissive, man or woman, endure this kind of pain? Hmmm.