by BrettJ
it wasnt very detailed when you came around to talking about them having sex.
detailed sex was a bit lacking but the love and story were definitly there. If you'll do more i'm willing to wait for the detailed sex.
Was that you had this wonderful, beautiful, strong tomboy and you turned her into some big breasted fem. I hate the fact that tomboys don't get the attention that they deserve. Other then that it was a wonderful romantic story.
That isone of the most beatiful and touching story I've read. Keep it up please.
Adding an intimate bath scene...sex toys session...anal love..
Outdoor scene..bondage..lovemaking in a dark theatre..
As senior citizens..