All Comments on 'The Lowlander Pt. 01'

You cant leave me haging!!!!!!! HURRY WITH CHAPTER 2 PLEASE!

This is one hell of a story! I cannot wait until the next part comes out...You are truly a fantastic storyteller. Well done!

I am certain that a sequel is made post it soon please and make my new year a lovely satisfying one.tnx(cinder).

What a great story. Can't wait for chapter 2

Hope to read the next installment soon

You have written a fantastic story. The character development, pain, passion, and suspense is pulls the reader deeply in. I want so much more! Worth 5 stars!

I can’t wait for the next installments. What a cliffhanger ! I remember reading the other low lander story and enjoying the stand alone short piece then. You did an amazing job expanding the story and carving out these characters.

This is absolutely fantastic. Interesting read, and I can't wait for the next installment. Great job.

I love love love this series. Can NOT wait for next installment!

AMAZING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!

Omg. I NEED the read the rest of this! Hurry it up! Lol

I really hope you continue with this story! The connection between all of the characters are so amazing. This is a story that definitely stays on my mind.

thank you for this piece, but Please write more, this is a badass story.

oh my god??? i am in love with this, an absolute diamond in the rough of literotica’s usually appalling lesbian category 🖤

and also seemingly wont be continued as is always the case with stories i really like on lit -.-

........... this was one amazing story. So sad that it looks likes its going to remain unfinished.

Flavours of Xena/Amazons/Viking princesses and with an actual love story or 3 running alongside.

Ah well, I can only hope you will come back to this story one day.

This is great writing but will the ending be finished?

"Prepare for war!" and then that's it. The end... or is it? Don't sound like an ending to me. Please continue this. Loved every second and want to know what happens next.

Yes thats human being, fighting for wealth or land or ego or love, but in the end there is no winner only to much losing there lives or theyr relatives ....... And we do it centuries and will do so ....... Intense events we will see what happen next in this tale

Hi,

This is honestly one of the best stories I've read on here (more than once now). Please say youree going to write a part 3, so we know what happens? xx

Wow so the series got cancelled, been 5 years no update. I’ll follow maybe one day you’ll finish it