All Comments on 'The Lure of the Sybian'

Hi everyone, please feel free to leave feedback. I"m a big girl.....I can take it, good or bad!

You are an excellent writer. Keep up good work More More!!!!

Dee (and Steve, of course!) you always stun me with your stories and this is no exception. I look forward to reading your continued adventures with the Sybian! I wonder that with Sybians and frozen sperm available so plentifully, how long until women *do* finally just get rid of all of us men?

2.0 is spectacular.

well done

Great writing and great scenario. The addition of the other couple made the story. It would be fun to find out what the other girl was doing and thinking as she watched and what happened as the night progressed.

Absolutely fucking fabulous, more and more of this please and soon. Cunt crazed fucker Lancashire, UK.