All Comments on 'The Mage King's Conquest'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Brilliant writing. Just gets better every time you post.

H4youH4youalmost 6 years ago
Part 2 please!

Can you please do a part 2? This left me sooo hot i came so hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 2?

Please continue this. Great writing, Would love to see Clan taken on the throne by the mage king

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Would love to find out what happens next ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

I loved this story so much. Writing was wonderful and it's one of the hottest stories I've ever read

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 5 years ago
Mmmm.

I do love when N-C/R turns into wanton, lustful desire. Grrrreat storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another chapter please

Please post another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
great!

Love this!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

Seriously.

This is one of my favourite stories on this website.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
SEQUEL

Jesus this story is amazing, PLEASE, make a sequal! I came like twice lmao

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely fantastic

BanibooBanibooabout 2 years ago

Amazing 😍. I need more!!!

GlamAngel3766GlamAngel3766about 2 years ago

This was such a well-written story! I'd love to read more of this story! This would make for a very interesting series or even if you just wrote a sequel told with alternating perspectives. I'm already filled with my own ideas of where this story could go.

tahokahontastahokahontasover 1 year ago

This is inexplicably, UNDOUBTEDLY on of the best stories I have read on this entire site. The elements of fear, fantasy, heartache, attempted resistance, and humiliating surrender make for top-tier level storytelling. And perfectly paced too!

Please keep writing in general, but especially on this one. PLEASE!!!

Would love to read a sequel where the Mage King does, in fact, fuck this young, handsome prince in front of the entire kingdom. Or what's left of it, rather. The dirty feeling that elicits would be so, so very delicious.

4Leather4Leather2 months ago

Such a mind blowing story. Never know if it’s magic or your own mind playing a game on you.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

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