All Comments on 'The Magic Question'

As a man I would want intercorse to be as you described for both parties. well done passionate, honest, satisfying,inspiring

The short paragraphs work well here!! You write sex scenes very well, I'm impressed!

Very nicely written. Your story takes me there and keeps me in the moment. Kudos!

Excellent story line. There is potential for a sequel. Hope you write it soon.

You have, as a reader on Literotica, two choices:

Either you want real literature, you got to leave your desk make it to the dusty library and grab the old books of Joyce, Puschkin, Thomas Mann or whatever you like..

Or .. you wanna get your dick hard, scratch the itchy thing, do the nasty ... you gotta leave this story with a voting 1 or, if you have some mercy, - 2 and search for some real sexy stories.

Sorry, N8dreamer, your story turns me off!

I wanted to say that this is a very well thought out and executed story. Your desciptive ability is tremendous and I look forward to reading more from you in the near future.(I hope)