All Comments on 'The Maid Ch. 01'

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18Webber18Webberover 14 years ago
Where's the MAID

I was disappointed being that I like stories about MAIDS, her effect on a family or a member of the household and not about a guys wife. Wrong title I'd say.

18Webber18Webberover 14 years ago
Where's the MAID

I was disappointed being that I like stories about MAIDS, her effect on a family or a member of the household and not about a guys wife. Wrong title I'd say.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not bad but...

YOUR = BELONGS TO = YOUR CAR

YOU'RE CONTRACTION OF YOU ARE = YOU'RE NOT A CAR

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Dogshit grammar.

you're = you are

your - your car

to - direction = to the shops

too - as well as = are you coming, too?

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