All Comments on 'The Maid Pt. 01'

Please don't post a story until you have an actual, complete chapter ready. This story ended too early, leaving the reader to feel let down rather than engaged and anticipating more. It was on its way to being a four or five star story, but your abrupt ending reduced it to three stars.

You start the story then it is as if you lost interest and decided to post an incomplete story rather than put the effort into finishing it or carrying it further. It has great potential but dies before even getting fully out of the starting gate.

Sadly, it petered out before reaching much of a conclusion. If you post Part Two -- and I hope you will -- you will have to pick up the pace quite a bit.

Only three stars for now; bring us some more and I'll rethink.

Thanks for sharing.