All Comments on 'The Making of a Dirty Old Man'

I like that after getting started Gina went all the way with Patti and enjoyed it. Would love to read another chapter.

Story, great sex I liked the mother daughter sex, He started off as a nice guy so try to keep it that way your next chapters and don't get too twisted.

Popping a cherry sounds good but leave out any gay shit (as another man)

See if he can help them get off the drugs

Love the dirty man. Hopefully there will be more stories of his new life as a dirty old man. Maybe next time he has two teenagers. And takes some picture for later.

fucking awesome story

great story and very good to stroke, off too keep on trucking will be waiting for more ten bears43.

So your fantasy is fucking drug whores.

No condom really smart.

See you next week at the aids centre.

But for real now, Drugs are no joke they can really fuck up your lufe so why even write about using them.

"EATING HIS LUNG" MUST HAVE BEEN PAINFUL.

He lost one cheap slut, and gained two cheap whores....

Sorry but this story is FUBAR.

Why the fuck would you write about some crackwhore pimping her own daughter to a stranger.

And that neighbourg does he have any brains left in him bij fucking crackpots.

That guy must realy hate his health.

i guess the other guy? never had a mother dauther combo it is the best. but would have been better if they were not crack whores next time maybe horny neibors who need money.

Why would he write about it? Because he wanted to! Why the fuck did you read it. I enjoyed it. 👍 they should critique writing style or grammar. Maybe how a story flows. But content? Wait wait... don’t tell me, your a vegan and a Christian.

Set the stage well, with the background leading up to the big event, which was then described nicely, with good variety and progression.

Ticked a lot of my boxes:

Woman who is destitute (or, at least, needy)

Deprived man with money

Older man with younger woman

Mother offering daughter for money

Older guy with teen

Shy guy becomes more confident and assertive

Single guy gets two gals

Sex for money

Mostly respectful to each other (including each was satisfied)

Teen impressed with old guy's sex skill

This great plot was told with good language ability.

I was never distracted by misspellings, wrong words, or grammar problems.

One Problem. His closing words to daughter Gina bode well for future encounters -- very interesting encounters(!), leaving us hopeful. But 4 1/2 years have elapsed. So, maybe another Literotica writer would favor us with the implied sequel? (Please notify us in the comments.)

Still, 5 stars from me.

Paul in Oklahoma

Good story, Daughters usually follow their Mothers profession into Sex & Drugs, or the Mother encourage their Daughter into Drugs & Sex & for Money, if Women were paid £1000 per Week to Work in Shops etc, perhaps Women would stop walking Streets & taking Drugs, & not risking their Health.

Please write more. Mommy & daughter should continue to please their neighbor...