All Comments on 'The Making of Chloé'

Excellent start, though it seems like this would be more appropriate to the Sci-Fi section.

And man, I'm hoping this turns into a kinky, sexy version of Pygmalion that it appears to be, because this scientist sounds like a douchebag.

99% of erotic stories are rehashing well worn themes. Congratulations on making the other 1%.

Well done. A fresh take on the erotic, I can't wait to read more of Chloé's tale.

Have enjoyed reading what you had so far. A very nice start! Hope you continue Chloe's sexual adventures..

for your comments and encouragement! I will certainly try to takes this further. Any suggestions are very welcome!

ooo this is interesting. i like your writing. look forward to more!

I want to read more! xx

So the mad scientists thinks it's a good idea to create a better, stronger, smarter, more dangerous predator? Cause we all know how well this movie ends!

Love this story, such a great twist on the normal old hats!!

Please write a second installment!