All Comments on 'The Mall'

This was a great story I love the twist at the end. I can't wait to read more.

Pittsfield, huh? Loved the story

Very clean writing style allows us to enjoy the action. Very nice twist at the end. Thank you!

Hi There

We live on the back of the lake you mentioned in this story

My wife and I have enjoyed taking pictures of her on the lake and in the wood between the golf course and Ridge Ave for many Years

She used to only wear a cover up on our boat when the kids were not with us

When she goes out in the summer she never wears panties under her dresses or skirts

We have been married over 40 years and have been doing this since we were first married

So We liked this story very much

Keep up the good work

I showed this story to my wife so that she sees that other people in our area do the same things that we do

would love to see more stories from you

but I sure did like the story, especially the ending. It's nice to see someone keep their vows once in a while,

Decisively written, a lot of confidence was put into this story and just enough detailing to be interesting rather than boring. I loved this short story and I love your style of writing.

I must admit I was bothered through-out the story of what appeared to have been an immoral and cheating woman, which made the twist at the end ever more sweet.

Once again, fantastic work.

Well written and stimulating, lucky guy.