All Comments on 'The Man in Charge'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I love a man that takes charge. Loved this story. Please continue it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fantastic!!!

Loved the story! I cannot seem to find a man like this. In my lifetime I have found only one. One who could "take" me! Give me what I want against my better judgement. Not enough real men out there. More stories like this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Is English your second language?

I don't expect professional level writing, but this reads as if it was written by someone who failed third grade English. This is a prefect example

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'But I'm married, I'm straight!' I would pled, in fact I am married but perhaps not all that straight given that I'm having an affair with another man, but he liked me to talk about me being married, it really got him off that he was fucking a married man, I think it was one of his favorite things about me.

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First of all, the word is plead. More importantly, this is one run-on sentence.

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 5 years ago
Treat me like you love me

This relationship can work with the Dom controlling but respectfully guiding the sub.

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 4 years ago
I'm married too

I would love to have a hot gay lover like Tom. I too am a married closeted man who has been having gay sex with men for a few years. However, I haven't had any overnights. I would love to be out of town on a business trip and a hot sexy well-hung man stays overnight -- we have hot passionate make-out sessions, we suck each other's cocks, and then he fucks me deep and hard (like in your story). I too will give myself to him when he's fucking me.

Please tell more stories like this one. It really turned me on.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Oh yes.So hot.I wish it was me

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