All Comments on 'The Man on the Phone'

by JamieB

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melsdadmelsdadover 16 years ago
Where's the story?

What a waste of my time.

What on earth are a bunch of words which went nowhere, doing in this site?

A story has a start and finish and in between all the words necessary to draw a picture of proceedings.

Try again, this time at least give us the basics.

Sorry.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A Very Interesting Story

A very well written and well thought out story. I also gave you 5s for your two BDSM story. I really enjoyed the change in the woman in the story when she heard the word "girl" to her reaction at the end. My submissive wife says she "Just melts when I call her girl"

You write very well. Keep up the good work.

Mike S.

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