All Comments on 'The Manager'

Forget using all the "word -- word" garbage as removing makes the story far easier to read. That and all the ... do noting and are used improperly, get an editor or study a basic grammar book to learn how and when to use.

I can't think what the other anonymous was on. The story premiss was good and it was well written.

Thank You for your time and effort, I certainly enjoyed it

Keep up the good work....

i loved it...very hot!! keep me cumming more please ;-)

Nice. Very tight and to the point, but with some insight into the characters as well. Good job here!

yes, it is.