All Comments on 'The Manor Pt. 01: Stella'

Shame really.

This has the potential to be a good story, with lots of sex with staff and students, but you can't write for toffee. Bad grammar, bad spelling and a total ignorance of how to construct a paragraph.

Before you post any more rubbish, do yourself a favour and get an editor.

Well thank you for your comments,

just to point some things out. Spelling is spell checked by me three times.

Then passed to Literotica.

Paragraphs set out is the only way my stories get published, I have posted with paragraphs set in different ways and have had them thrown back for correction, so what you see is not really my issue.

As for grammar, Stella is based on a young woman who has not been very well educated through her own problems, which I might add will come to light later on. So I have written her speech in such a way that it may seem confused. And one last point I have been writing for around 7 months and is all new to me. But thank you any way for your comments, negative are as good as positive.