All Comments on 'The Marine & The Beauty Queen Ch. 05'

I will reserve judgment until the last chapter, but the way you wrote Susan, it would seem impossible for her to cheat. Yet she is sucking off the pastors dick. I cannot see a reconcile, but after reading your own comments defending her, that is exactly what is going to happen. As much as he put her on a pedestal, and her subsequent betrayal of him and his marine honor code above all else, I cannot see a reconcile for she truly dishonored and disrespected him. Especially taking the pastors side in the first chapter. For him to take her back would make him a wimp not a marine.

But I will reserve judgment.

I can see you're going to have him wimp out and accept her as a cheating slut with the pastor no less!

Failry nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing where things go from here.

2 folks in that much love, hard to believe she would hurt him like that. still wondering where you are headed. thanks

Thank you. I have really enjoyed this story. Just in case this is not the end I shall take a look occasionally for a continuation.

"Stretch"

I really enjoy your writing style it flows very well and the story so far has been a terrific read. Can't wait to see where you take the tale from here

Why, Susan why? Nothing in this tale indicates she had a reason to cheat. We'll see...

Still rolling along and enjoying it.