All Comments on 'The Marks of the Scar'

Did you proofread this load of crap? I wish there was a rating lower than zero.

I loved the story line. Kindness and compassion is in very short supply now days. Don't be discouraged by the previous posters ignorance. We are - with few exceptions - amatures who have something we want to say.

It is unfortunate that professional morons get to comment, and take cheap shots.

what could have been a deep & emotional heartfelt story turned out to be a joke....cancer is not a joke and neither what it does to people physically and emotional....

This is one of the best stories I have run into at Literotica; and I've been reading them for several years. As another commentator noted, this story is about compassion and love, it isn't about sex. This should be reading for all those who have suffered physical loss that has been psychologically devistating to them.

This was okay. It needs to be more fleshed out. There's so little back story to their relationship. If you didn't have it done already, a second set of eyes on this would probably have helped. I think the main problem is that it simply moved too fast. There was no sense that Sue was ready for this. But there's a decent premise here. --wlt

I agree with anon USA,this could have been a 5 star story if it had been fleshed out.Still a good effort.

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I wish this story could have been 5 chapters long, but because of all the so called critic's on here who can't write and like to knock another's work of enjoyment for us the readers.! Live to read and be glad you are alive to be able to and not ate up with cancer.! Use your brains and not your stupidity to knock others who write for "you" and "me" for us to enjoy and if you don't like the way they write then quit reading and go to a Bar and get drunk, but stay off of here.! **Great story and need more like them on here. Thanks. JAG/TSO

a very poor attempt to portray a potentially meaningful story. There is no way this ham bam approach can scratch the surface of depression. If the authour wants to write about serious issues a far more mature approach is required. Or stick to lighter subjects. -- UK CYNIC

25 points for your efford. But frankly, I think you have got no clue. I know what I am talking about because my own wife lost both breasts in a 6 year batle with cancer. Do you really think it takes a 5 minute confrontation to fight depression, bad selfimage and what not? No way jose. Write about what you know. Regards, Umberto

I agree with other posters. This is a great premise, but doesn't feel like a complete story. Good bones, but it needs filled out. Keep working on your writing.