All Comments on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings Ch. 01'

This has the elements of being one very hot story. Martin must have really upset his step-mom. Hope you give us more of this story soon.

Really good story hope it continues and explains more of the plot.

wondering why stepmom is doing this. why /what martin did to her, please dont make us wait long hehe

Its over!

Please update this when you get a chance.

One of the best stories I have read on this site.

i love how it ends, with him calling her a slut as though he wasn't part of that hand-job. Very true to life. i hope you have later parts planned out because planning will ensure you don't run out of ideas.

i think the idea of a forced-fem gay marriage is super super hot. Good job.

and well written. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Thank you for sharing this stroy it has peaked my interest it is a must to see how it comes out

sissy

ana

where are the illustrations?

this is about the whole story, not just this chapter. we don't usually read 'gay' theme stories but this is well done. it is long but it does not lag. could have used spell checker more but that is a minor thing. you could flesh it out with more setting description but that is only more window dressing. We do think that as time went on, people around Martin should be using 'Marcia' more and only Martin should be using his old name in his thoughts. By the way, is it pronounced 'mar-CE-a' or 'mar-SHA'? we have seen it both ways.

A very credible start to an interesting "sissyfication". Looking forward to reading more.

Well his stepmom is certainly an evil biatch.