All Comments on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings Ch. 13'

You should have stopperd about 11 installments ago.

Get a new story and stop flogging this one!

IF there had been a half star I would have ticked that instead of 1.

This is chapter 4 reposted. Oops?

Sorry I have psoted the wrong chapter by mistake. I need to figure out how to remedy this. Will post new one ASAP.

No one cares.

Enjoying the story rik, hope you continue. Don't pay any mind to the dissenters

Looking forward to the next installment, as soon as you can work out the bug to replace the chapter posted in error. This is a great story, and it will be interesting to see where you take it.

I hope you get this worked out soon.

I really enjoy your writing.

I'm always looking forward to your next chapter cant wait

The people that don't like it don't have to read it...and should shut the f*ck up! Looking forward to the next chapter...

I am still trying to get this taken care of. I have made one more attempt to get the proper chapter posted. We'll see what happens. May take a couple of more days.

keep going its a great read, the people who don't enjoy the story should just read something else

Great chapter!

Keep on writing Rick. If there would be six stars I would give you. Love your story and also this chapter.

sorry, not even one of your readers would put up with this sort of treatment

This story is really becoming boring and very tedious to read. What started out as a good opening few chapters has become nothing more than reading about this guy being dressed and then undressed, and then dressed again, and undressed again. I have enjoyed much of the story as a whole, but feel you really need to step it up a little. You focus far too much on him being dressed and redressed.

has anyone considered that the baron might actually be in love with martin?

Also, there were people martin knew at the wedding. Will there be anyone he knows at the upcoming debut party?

What do Martin's ex-wives think?

It seems there is no shortage of people, hired by the baron, who are lined up to humiliate Martin.

Martin's life is so controlled he is becoming more desperate and possibly violent. But if Martin cannot find a way to free himself then his despair will lead to depression and thought of suicide. And if he doesn't suicide then the toll on his health from depression will become greater. Stress will lead to chronic illnesses, ulcers, and possible stroke. Then this story ends in tragedy with Martin's death.

Martin needs hope. He needs to find a way to either fight back or escape. He needs to believe that he can regain his freedom. Without hope for the future, Martin is lost.

the baron is psychotic. He is in love with power and control. That's why he passed on those many beautiful women Constance mentioned.

The Baron can't force the "free women" to do as he says. They're protected by modern laws and can file for divorce.

The Baron can force Martin. Under the laws governing arranged marriages Martin is basically property. He and everything he owns will eventually become the Barons.

hmmm still love this story, and the one saying that even readers here wouldn't put up with such treatment ... guess again , I would gladly be the Baron's wife! :-)

Excellent story! Are we going to see Ch. 14 soon?

does martin ever get some revenge. If not this story is not worth reading.

i think payback would be bad for the story , him coming to love it would be nice in the end ....

Hope rik will post another one soon ?

One possible twist would be for the Baron to take Martin off his anti-erection medicine, and for Martin to find, to his chagrin, that he is actually getting very hard when the Baron kisses and fondles him. Of course, whether or not the Baron would appreciate a hard cock on his sexy wife remains to be seen.

When is Ch 14 coming??????

Him coming to love it in the end would be nice...but Missy and maybe Lisa should get their just desserts...oooh and the sweet, lovely mother-in-law!!!

The story grows stale while we anxiously await Martin's next challenge.

When is Ch 14 coming??????

Hurry up. Hurry up

it would have potential if it wasn't so repetitive, how many different circumstances can you have him shouting defiance and not being taken seriously? come on man, move the story and either have his personality change or nuke it

Early post I said the baron was psychotic. I should have said the baron is a sociopath.

F literally shut his fucking mouth or pump drugs in him its getting tiring to see that again and again.