All Comments on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings Ch. 14'

What to do.

What to do.

Please dont take so long next time! Xxx

Great, I really like this story. Please continue, its brilliant.

love it!!

im new to this site, so im now going to read the other chapters!!

This is an interesting twist that I hadn't expected. Very nice! The fact that Martin found Dorothy's tattooed nipples strangely erotic and his willingness to walk hand in hand with "her" opens some interesting possibilities. Perhaps Dorothy and Martin will become friends and lovers. The Baron might enjoy watching Dorothy and Mrs Vargos getting to know each other intimately. Could Dorothy actually become Martin's concubine? Could Martin get hard looking at "her"? We can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Nice job, and please keep writing!

A fantastic chapter, my favourite so far! I don't know what Martin is complaining about he's living my dream! Can't wait for the next chapter

It is great to see that the author is paying as much attention to character development and to the literary merits, as to the erotic aspects of a well told story. I still fear for the worst, but find the story much more compelling now that Martin is now starting to think and make choices based on what he wants. Can't wait for chapter 15 and some new twists and turns!

And I was totally convinced that Missy was the Widow! Wow, I never saw that one coming. Rik, keep up the good work, and please don't make us wait to much longer for the next chapter!

RUN MARTIN RUN!!!

i'm so enjoying this story ,each ch keeps my interest to find out what is next,

Thank you for sharing your wonderfl talant

hugs

ana