All Comments on 'The Mask Becomes You Pt. 01-10'

I hope you will not stop here :)..

Amazing! I dont know if you plan on continuing, but this is a great story

A GREAT START TO A GREAT STORY!!!!

Please continue this story. I need to know what happens!!

Fascinating to see a mind controller struggling against themselves in this way.

A really good story, keep up the good work.

this is a genuinely good story, where I'm actually rooting for the protagonists to come out on top which is pretty rare

i laughed out loud at the part where she realized everybody was as broke as her haha

Thanks for the awesome reception so far! I am continuing the story, currently updating monthly elsewhere on the internet, with early access to part 11 available via my patreon. My plan is to wait until I have another cluster of chapters together and then post them here all together like parts 1-10. So watch this space, likely be several months though.

Whats your patreon

This is amazing I really enjoyed reading it!!! I really hope you write more of this story!!!