All Comments on 'The Mask Ch. 03'

Do yourself a favour and get an editor, and its SHUDDERED not shuttered, look up what a shutter is. This whole story has no redeeming qualities.

Good story love the the characters!

Even though u hav mispelled some words im totally willing 2 overlook them do to the awesomeness of this story. Please don't stop

Don't stop writing for your first story this is really good I am hooked,

haters will hate let them be but continue to write as someone onces told me I person can say what they want but only you can change your will

P.s. more please I want to know what she isn't telling him about his scars

Well I must say I have been hooked from the beginning and you certainly know how to keep the intrigue! I look forward to seeing more of this story. It just keeps getting better and better!!!

Truly an amazing story, you must please finish this! I'm captivated from beginning to end and am yearning for the rest!!! :D 2 thumbs up, and keep on writing!

It has been AGES but I am holding out hope that you will finish this. You have a lot of talent thank you for sharing it here.

But as for tantalizing us......I can't thank you for that. I must just beg you for more.

Warm Regards,

R

And a good one too

You have the basis for a good story here...you should finish it.

I'll be dead by the time these writers finish these stories...ugh