by Angellica1612
I am one of those hairy legged good old boys from Texas, and I have almost never read anything from this category (rape). Gotta tell ya, I could not have been more surprised at how poetically this work flowed; you managed to take a weed from the human garden and, as best as possible, create a beautiful flower (no, it's not perfect, but it's damn good). Congrats, what a pleasant read on what is typically an ugly subject. 2-14-02
Angellica,
I'm just read all 4 posted stories. I love your writing and wish you'd post a new story here, perhaps a BBW story. Or perhaps you could share where and how else you publish.
I'm not really turned on by reluctance or non consented sex, and since nothing on this story feels like it is done against the her will, I think I can say I'm still not turned on by it, but by a very romantic story written in such a talented way at one point I could smell the ocean breeze.
Thanks for the story and congratulations on your wonderful writing!
Thank you Angellica that was very erotic. I will be reading more.
. . . . that I have read latley. Great and skilful writeing and I look foward to another piece from you. Sit back and sip a little bit of bubbly, you desetve it.
An unconvincing run of the mill rape fantasy. Thumbs down.
isn't erotic in real life it is despicable, however; this story is a well constructed erotic fantasy and as a fantasy it is very good and enjoyable.
Thank you!
taking something so disgusting & all around f*cked up & turning it into this beautiful, sensual masterpiece...now THAT'S talent!! 5 stars & thanx 4 sharing! now i need a glass of water ;o)