by xcoyote21
this was one of the hottest stories i have ever read. this is the first time i have ever posted a comment!!
Great story.Hope you continue with it .let us know it the 2 every find out the truth.
Funny, sexy and hot. just a well written and good story. Thanks
You absolutly have to continue this. Such a good story,you can run this as a short series.Please!!!!!!!!!!!
once again women/moms like myself are totally over-looked by writers on this site..mom/daughter bi..but no dad/son bi..nothing a bigger turn-on for us..than dad/bi stud jock son bi action..with us participating..and being cumsluts for them..
I didnt like the way the story flows, I got turned off during the first page, its as if you are trying to cram all of this information in about the people within the first couple of paragraphs. Also the description of the girls were kind of cliche ...but its erotica so there is really no such thing. I think that the story has great promise but it just needs to be smoother.
Sorry to be harsh, just being honest and would appreciate it if you did the same if I were to write a story.
It was fantastic! Brilliant!
Would love to read a sequel when the two find out who was really fucking them, getting agreeably surprised and then doing it all over again.
Please learn the difference between 'site' (a location) and 'sight' (something you see).
didn't finish the story i don't like a story with cheating in it just as bad as one with sexual violence or rape
Loved your story!I would like to see you write more on this family for the future.
You are reading a story about incest and you want to complain about cheating or rape!!!! Go let uncle donnie touch you again.......But to the author great story.
you my friend are one of the best writers ever! This was one of the best stories on her kudos to you keep writing
Hi,
really loved the story!
My only annoyance was the overuse of CAPS every time the character realized his good fortune.
i would luv 2 c a sequel where they found out it was him and see how that would play out!!!!!!
Have to agree with everyone else, would love to see a sequel when they found out it was the son/brother
What more can a person say, but what has already been stated & I agree w/all! Many a storyline could follow w/these themes! Do keep writing as we readers miss U !! -C-
continue this story the father should be the blame for three pregnancies
I for one like the fact that although the mother was willing to stretch the boundaries for her daughter, they didn't know who they were with at the time. Who knows? Maybe they'd love to find out, but him getting away without anyone knowing kind of makes it better as an incest story
Why don't you write more on this story? You're a great writer, so please write more and make it a series.
The first time I read it, years ago. 1 Star for posting an old story. I'm not even sure that it's your story.
Why no follow up? If the mom is willing to sleep with her daughter as well as allow her husband to fuck her, why is the son left out? What happened the next day? Does mom figure it out? Or does sister or Dad? This needs finishing!
After my 5 (or 6 time) re-reading this one, which is by the way very, very hot and steamy, I can see how the next chapter could work. These are rooted in two questions I have: 1) Did the mom 'accidentally' drop those notes or did she deliberately drop them? and 2) How did he (fortuitously) get his dad's wallet which luckily contained the room key and the cash he needed. Also, is the fact that he was sitting in the lobby when they first walked in and was able to get in later because the guard mistaken him for his dad.
Also, having been done similar stuff when I was much younger, I know that if you have that much alcohol to not notice the difference between your husband and your son (I very much doubt they have similar builds) then you are not going to passout soon and not go for 5 hours of uninterrupted sex. So that leads me to believe while the Mother and sister were drunk, they would still be able to see a difference.
So for this to work, it seems to me the Mom may have done some arranging. That would make for a awesome sequel (heck even a pre-quel) for this story!
Regardless, I have thoroughly enjoyed the story. The cliff hanger is killing me :-)
Olin naamiaisissa siskon kanssa. Sisko oli sairaanhoitaja ja minä lääkäri. Nussin sairaanhoitajan pillua paljaalla.
Did he ever cum in a pussy??? Preferred a blow job... MEH! Anal? Not interested I'm not gay.
Lost one stat for using "OMG" instead of typing it out or using a different exclamation. This isn't a text.
EXCELLENT!!! The only thing I was hoping for was that he'd reveal himself to his mom & sister before they passed out, then wonder if it was a dream or really their son/brother that gave them the fucking of a lifetime.
It would have been better had they found out who he was, and liked it so much they wanted to continue at home, but...oh well.
I had hoped that somehow the next morning they would discover the mistake and maybe even piece together who the other Zorro was.