All Comments on 'The Masked Woman and the Mistress'

Loved this story, so hot. Sounds like Troy is living the dream!!

The perfect prequel for these characters. You're building quite the fantasy universe here, populated by some unique players. Fantastic. Hope you've got more planned.

LtD

Besides being very hot and erotic, your writing is superb. Your command of the English language is top notch. I only read your stories now, as the other fiction writers sentence structure is elementary at best. You get me so freaking hot and wet. I love it.

Two planets circling the same star. Wow

Thank you for these characters and a glimpse into this world.

This story had me going from beginning to end. I can't wait to dig in to your other works.

Fantastic and well-written! I love your user name as well.

"She pinched my nipples and tugged them sharply and painfully. I can safely say it was the most embarrassing moment of my life, naked in front of seven fully clothed women, with a naked collared sub pinching my nipples with apparent joy."

I would love to be in this situation -- having 7 fully clothed women watching me naked and collared while a female sub plays with my nipples! I would love having 1 of the 7 women fondle my sensitive nipples as well!

A perfect scenario and a smooth transition into submission. We would all enjoy such a privilege.

To be young as Laney and Troy,.to be able and willing to perform at a summer party. I had hoped the quests would play a larger roll perhaps another time. Hang tough Troy