All Comments on 'The Masquerade'

Well thought out and written.....devious and wickedly delightlful....the plot thickens and twists at the end.....really loved the ending, the beginning and all which was sewn in between the beginning and the end.....good story teller

...but spoiled somewhat by erratic spelling and missing words here and there.

Hi and thanks for the comments I am glad you enjoyed my story. I am so glad that Wicked and Devious Anonymous enjoyed the story and the twist. I hope you keep reading and enjoying my stories. And I am thankful for Good But Anonymous critiques, I would really love it if you could let me know where the spelling mistakes are because my editor did a great job fixing my spelling mistakes I thought. Maybe its because I am Australian and we spell things differently to Americans. But if I am wrong and there are spelling mistakes we missed I would really be happy for you to edit my future stories to make sure they are right. Please contact me and let me know the errors so that I can improve.

Thanks again

Jamie

These is deffinately one of my favs of yours =) its so fun

Excellent. Thanks

Where do they know each other from if they don't live in the same city?