All Comments on 'The Masquerade Ball'

The story really drew me to its world and got me hot but I still have question. May be I just want more.

You shall have more, Darlin'

Love how the historical references crossed an intriguing gothic horror story heavily laced with eroticism! Bravo!! Five stars!

i would wrte more about how iloved this story but im getting close to cummo

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I am off to see whether you have written anything more solid.

It was rubbish, sorry no willy's in erotic stories. everyone was masked and you didn't know who they where, she then went on to name everyone that was fucking, I ask you. Next the whole room was naked, in the following line someone was lifting up Lisa's skirt, I could go on. sorry it as the makings of an erotic story, a good lit author should rewrite it then we could all get off on it. I am a reluctant critic, knowing, no matter how many flows there are in the writing, i couldn't do it any where near as good. But these comments are supposed to help the author improve. I sincerely hope the author understands my criticism