All Comments on 'The Masquerade Ch. 02'

. . . I don't often read stories from the female perspective, but when I do its the *story* that holds my interest. While I think the romance is very strong in this piece, the revving engine feels forced. I bet there's a more effectual way to disguise the initial mechanical memory, while still alluding to impending conflict .

Great story,

Just my two cents,

- Huufs

I really feel the passion. Please don't stop writing...

keep going, a good story!

I'm loving what you are posting....

From 'Anon: Not going to lie...'

'While I think the romance is very strong in this piece, the revving engine feels forced. I bet there's a more effectual way to disguise the initial mechanical memory, while still alluding to impending conflict'

Can you actually articulate what you mean? Its just nonsence, anon - get a life! .