All Comments on 'The Massage'

What a great first story. I can't wait to hear more. You definitely need to write about the man-on-man display for their girlfriends. Can't wait.

Really enjoyed this story. Easy to visualize it happening. Hope you write more.

Great story, I hope there is more on the way, kept me hard the whole time I read it.

Enjoyed your story - hope it was true - and you certainly know how to keep one's interest in the complete scenario. Having enjoyed many massage's myself and the thoughts of "what if" as the masseur's hands flicked past and on my "privates" I can definitely understand the sheer sexuality of an intimate massage taking things past the point of no return. This story show's how anyone who is heterosexual can be overtaken with pure lust by physical contact. Pity I have never experienced the authors "massage" but I can concur with the likelihood of it happening.

That was an incredibly hot story. I don't usually get this hard reading about two men together, but I am rock hard. I can't wait to read your next story. I would love to be the recipient of a massage given under these circumstances.

I LOVED the story....I have had a few massages that ended that way and they were HOT as well!!! Keep up the great work...looking forward to reading more of your work....

As a curious guy you had me very turned on by this story, I came very quickly after finishing it! Can't wait for the next chapter ;)

I can honestly tell you, that is the hottest I've been in a long time. I was so turned on I was shaking ,wanting it myself. Now I have had lots of massages, but none like that, and now I want to get them on a regular basis from a HOTT Man

What a truley emotional story and so sexy too. I loved the body exploration and the awakened lust they both had. Can't wait to get to a massage. By body is feeling stiff and hard, at least some of it. Thanks a lot.

Happens for many in similar circumstance. many stay on dl. A large number of women want to see m/m. sounds like best of both world's

Your story was simply amazing. So hot, but also so full of detail. You really have a knack for this, I could picture it all so clearly. Please please please continue writing, I can't wait to read more from you. Such a great fantasy, if only I could be so lucky. I've read this story multiple times already, and it never fails to get me off. ;)

great detail, very realistic. made me hard and cum.

I loved the story. I have just two minor comments. 1) you made a very quick mention of gay thoughts in your younger years. It was a quick mention that could of been explored more, not only at the beginning of the story but through out the the story. How did the teen feel about his first playful touch? Did Harry's first flirting touch remind him about his younger days? There are a lot of options of including that one minor mention through out the story.

2) This was a great story. With your writing skills you should stay away from the one cyber-campy description used of "his rigid sexy meat". In the middle of a very steamy story, that made me chuckle for a moment.

I truly hope you keep writing. I'm looking forward to reading your next submission!

I loved the story. You gave great detail and a wonderful build up. Kept me rock hard and leaking precum the entire time! Great job and PLEASE continue!

Please make a second story to this :3

Amazingly successful first story Ben. Your description of events had me right there with you. BOING! I look forward to reading more.

So hot. And event hotter to think this is a real experience. Would you write what happened next with the masseur? And if you actually had an encounter with your own girlfriends watching. Pleeeeasssse

This story is very very erotic, totally realistic, & (yes!) romantic.

If you are bi curious, this story is a 'must read'.

I wish it had been me getting the massage & getting fucked.

I have been bi curious since the onset of puberty; it was not a permanent state but homosexual impulses would come & go. As a rule they were triggered by a touch, or an image in a magazine or a movie. (No internet yet, TV was 'vanilla'.) Whenever my bi side came to the fore, my homosexual thoughts were constantly present. Then all of a sudden my bi side would go back to its 'dormant state'.

I have never had sex with a man, not even some semi-inappropriate touching as a pretend joke.

:)

Fantastic work - I want to be massaged like that so bad.

I want this so bad...hot, hot, hot!