by bearmark
Well, first of all - thank you for the comment. I am not "harping" on the piercings, I think, just a minor body feature I chose to add. I do hope you find stories that lack this particular aversion of yours.
PS If you like, I can cut a version of the story WITHOUT the pierced nipple for you :-).
Sorry but when I got to the pierced nipple it just turned me off and I couldn't read any more.