All Comments on 'The Massage Club'

Very good tale ,I hope you are continuing on Chapters two and higher!

Thank you kindly.

ST

I loved the teasing way the story drew me in. I hope there's a second chapter. Thanks I really enjoyed this.

This is great. Now that the parents are not coming home yet, they can be naughty by staying naked around the house while cooking or play wrestling and their genitals accidentally touching or accidentally impaled a bit while talking with their parents on the phone. After soccer the brother will be naughty to sniffs his sisters sweaty panties and they laugh about the musky smell and it progressed to sniffing her musky pussy when they get home from soccer game.

I just gave you a 5 star.

Very good story. Soooo hot. Please do a second chapter!

That was a very good story . gave it a 5 and hope you do more like it .Thanks for the great story .....

Really, really hoping you will write a chapter 2 (at the very least)

5/5

Such a fun erotic story, with the slow build, fantastic.

Part 2 ? Please

Fantastic tease. Been a while since I have read one of yours - MORE PLEASE

This is fine in every sense of the word. A following chapter is a must have. Thank you!

A sequel is a must! Hell, I hope this continues as a series. 5/5!

Please let them have sex without touching.

My cock is as hard a shis

I would love to see a part 2 to this story I enjoyed it very much. I hope you write a chapter 2.

A possibly, realistic story and those are the best! Great job thank you

I loved it will keep an eye open for a part two. I think it really calls for a part 2. May need to repeal rule 3.

Definitely needs a sequel. Would like to see multiple parts

Great story loved how it progresses! Hope to team more of same type.

would to read where they finally have sex together maybe you can have part two the love making

Very good descriptions and progression. Siblings can help each other out without going all the way. It can be a lot of fun and beneficial to both.

Please more

I can't wait to read the rest.

We need to hear how Rule Nine and Ten are implemented in the next week before the parents arrive home.

Oh the suspense...are they or are they...and YES I wrote it like I mean...LOL!!! I agree, have to have a chapter two!

I found the story very entertaining, love the way how they both set the massage club rules, and keep on adding to them

I definitely want to see parts 2 and 3

About as wonderful and slow as an arousal can be without going all the way. I can just imagine Ch2, where Katy is on her back, and Sam lets his hard cock lightly stroke her pussy without going is, and he is on his back, and she strokes her clit against the bottom of his cock. Eventually she moves up a smidge too far and the head slips between her thighs, and pokes her opening. She thinks, "Oh, what the hell!", and takes him in. I hope!!

After the second massage session, I put down my phone, lit a scented candle, dimmed the lights, undressed and laid on my comforter. The buildup had me so charged, by the time I completed your story I'd left a large puddle from my orgasms on the bedtop. Very well written, but have to say I was a little disappointed when Katy didn't slide the vibrator in or around Sam's ass just before he came. But maybe that's just me projecting. Definitely a drenched-finger 5-stars! Mons~

This was a great story please continue

Definitely the best yet in the sibling catagory. Pleeeease continue the story.

I cummed so hard and long just by reading your story. my body is sill spasming!!!

I love the way the sexual tension built gradually and the rules slowly increased, both constraining but also almost encouraging further escalation.

I wonder what will happen when they reach rule 69!

GREAT story! After reading that I needed to touch myself. My fingers we as drenched as they've ever been. Please write a sequel where they have sex in their parents' bed... Multiple times...

Loved this...Hope the story-line continues

I loved the build up in each session.

Looking forward to the next chapter! Five stars!

Definitely deserves a chapter 2 and more of these two.

Please write about their next week of massage club... I check for it everyday and thinking about what will happen is driving me crazy!!! PLEASE!!!

Great start so hot! And good imagination. Where are the rest of the chapters?

Read this story twice back to back and had to jerk off during both reading, massive amounts of cum on both occasions. I think I will be going again in a minute.

How are there no comments yet?! This story is incredible, please continue it!

Please!!!!

Please release part 2. This is a fabulous story.

Need part 2 asap otherwise the interest will die.

working on sequel, having fun writing it!

Spen:

Enjoyed the story but please; stop with the "epic". It is so overused in your story and in daily use / advertising etc.. It's not really creative; trendy maybe, but surely you can do better.

Love this, glad to hear you're working on a sequel. Definitely need to see what happens in the next few sessions of massage club. Keep up the great work!!!

How much longer till that sequel is out sterling?

This story is so freaking hot! I would kill for a second chapter! Good work Sterling! 5/5

This is absolutely one of the hottest and sexiest build up for a story I have ever read anywhere! Please, please add another part. 5 Stars, would give 10 if it was possible!!!

This is probably the first time EVER that I have read a story, word by word. SPEN you are to erotic writing what Mark Twain was to comedy.

That was easily the hottest no sex story I've ever read. Bravo

I've never bothered to comment on any other story before, but DAMN that was a good story. I just had to share my appreciation and say good job. I also would like to say that: "I'll say this, us not having sex was the best sex I've ever had." <This line was brilliant.

Well written, well developed storyline. I was drawn into the story and the mental picture you created, I could see this being a movie! Bravo indeed!

Maybe a new rule would let readers join the club. And we could be allowed to massage our private parts.

While Katy is massaging his thighs and legs, she surely will encounter some leg and thigh hair that grows there on an 18 year old boy, or young man. Then while she has shaved her pussy, no mention is made of his pubic bush, so I assume he has hair around his cock. If he's lucky, there's a bit of hair for a treasure trail and perhaps between his pecs. All something to get Katy excited. It can be a turn on to touch a young man's chest hair, treasure trail, and pubes!

This is best story i have read ever. simply great....

Thank you! My stories are not as innocent, but you motivate me to do a better job. I love the perfect pacing and gradual escalation you use to build sexual response. It's an effective device in erotica and you do a great job with it. Keep up the good work!

There definitely needs to be more chapters. Please continue.

Now that was hot, red hot !

Can't wait to read chapter 2.

You know if they use a condom there is no way they could brake rule number 3 no skin on skin contact. Just a suggestion hopefully they will fuck in the end looking forward on reading chapter 3.

Great read. Hope you consider continuing this story.

Outstanding story! I am so glad that someone on here knows how to build the tension up! Looking forward to more! Great job!

My favorite stories are where brother and sister slowly and affectionately overcome taboos. Great story!

Super great story can't wait to read 2 so better get started.

It was slowburn hot story. Thank you