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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Come back and write some more

Please write more chapters

Perhaps they need to trade wives for a week.

Also want to read about the secretaries being controlled.

Remake the receivers into collars so they could be worn while naked.

Think about selling the units to the ultra wealthy to make millions.

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savilleover 6 years agoAuthor
RE: Come back and write some more

To all - I am working on Matter of the Mind Ch. 4 - with your suggestions - well most of them. Keep looking I hope have the new chapter out soon.

Thanks for the feedback.

Barber_o_Saville

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