All Comments on 'The Maze'

Finally ! You got a story with a different scenario, and a good "twist" at the end of it. Not very erotic, but a good read

I think that fits Ashon and most of his stories: women are inferior creatures to be used and abused for the amusement of non-empathetic male losers

Honestly well done even if not everyone will like it.

this author...admire the imagination. Always a winner with me. Nice, tight, quick takes...write on! The big 5 from me.

Being a virgin and a tease who didn't plan on giving it up I would be really surprised if she was on any birth control and he didn't use a rubber so I sure hope if she gets pregnant she sues his ass off in court and gets lots and lots of child support. Also hope he was clean or I would be sure to take him to court and Rocky too as an accessory to the crime.

I loved the last line!!