All Comments on 'The Mbayo Clinic Ch. 02'

by Memphisto23

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
great explicit sex

A good story with hot sex memories. I hope that they make it through their turmoil.

Thanks

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

I loved this chapter. The sex was obviously very hot. I loved how you had him do what he was told to...getting back to why he was with Audrey. Hopefully they can get back there. While I've never been through it, I am sure that is what having to go through fertility shit can do to a couple...the stress of it must be tough. Seems like one of the most effective parts of the treatment is him getting back to basics...But we've been seeing this all from his side though...will you be showing us what Audrey is thinking since their marriage will only work if she also remembers what it is she is missing? I look forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see how it goes for them. I just think you need to show how she is feeling too.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Stick

This author is a Mybayo drumstick for writing this silly crap.

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